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There once was a girl,
who didn't love life.
she hated it so much,
slit her wrists with a knife.
people saw it coming.
she always seemed depressed.
hardly ever smiled,
as her life was one big mess.
she tried to keep secret,
about all the pain she had.
for if it came out,
it would scare her mom and dad.
the girl had known,
it was time to let go,
as she was waiting,
on deaths row.
now she is dead,
as you can see.
no more suffering,
because she is free.
who didn't love life.
she hated it so much,
slit her wrists with a knife.
people saw it coming.
she always seemed depressed.
hardly ever smiled,
as her life was one big mess.
she tried to keep secret,
about all the pain she had.
for if it came out,
it would scare her mom and dad.
the girl had known,
it was time to let go,
as she was waiting,
on deaths row.
now she is dead,
as you can see.
no more suffering,
because she is free.
Literature
Suicide
You called me up,
crying,
down the phone,
you said you'd taken some pills,
and didn't want, to die alone.
Is your life,
that messed up,
you had to take steps,
to make it stop?
I cried to you,
to call 999,
you said you couldn't listen,
to voices other than mine.
your voice sounded weak,
fighting for breath,
the silence was noticeable
as if i was deaf.
The streets of heaven,
are already full tonight,
full of souls,
souls of angels,
souls like yours,
souls of people,
whose life ended too soon.
Your death,
has brought nothing but pain,
upon this world.
Literature
The Suicide
I saw your pain,
and yet I did not try to fix it.
I saw the tears,
and yet I could not dry them.
You talked of your troubles,
and yet I gave no time to listen.
I feel as though I could have saved you, now.
I made no effort at all.
I feel as though I added to your anguish.
I wanted to help, but I didn't know what to do.
I cannot imagine the pain you must have been in,
forgive me for not seeing.
Oh, God, I don't know why I couldn't see!
Blinded by my own petty distractions and excuses
Too busy to save you...
I am so sorry, Dan,
And I pray that you're in heaven as I pray for forgiveness.
Please know that I cried for you once i
Literature
Suicide
Slash my wrists
Slit my throat
Feeling the drain of blood
Feeling empty
Days long past passing before my eyes
Have no feeling now
I see nothing but black
No fire, no bright light
No nothing
Just Nothing
Nothing exists after death
Noting not you, and not me
Nothing
Than I awake
With the blade still in my hand
Untouched by my blood
I put it down and walked into the black abyss
Called life.
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it was going to be my comical suicide note back in the day.
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Really good